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[Spain x Reader]

~Reader's POV~
You weren't one to pay much attention in you Spanish class, since you either spent your time doodling or looking out the window at the occasional sight outside.
But you did catch it when your teacher announced your final Spanish exam that you would be having tomorrow.
When class ended, you literally ran to the library. Time to hurry up on some studying time. Slamming a Spanish textbook on one of the desks near the window, you hurriedly flipped to the first lesson and started reading.
By the end of the could hopelessly were going to fail the exam so bad.
Literally pulling your hair out in frustration, you went through a list of ideas that could help you out on your Spanish test...
Well there is Antonio...he has the best grades in that class...
Should you?
Deciding it was all or nothing, you gathered up your courage and found him walking down the hallway.
"Hey! Um...Antonio!"
When he turns around to look at you, he smiles and replied, "Hello chica~"
"Uh...yeah hi. So you know about the test tomorrow right? Well uh...I was kinda wondering if you were available after school so you could me study or something?" you said, talking a bit slowly to make sure you didn't trip on your words too bad.
He grins and replies, "A study date?"
You would believe how fast your face heat up.
"N-No! Just wondering if you could tutor me and stuff..." then you regain your composure and shoot back coldly, "If your busy then whatever. I can always ask someone else."
Trying to make him jealous seemed to work, since he quickly replied, "Alright alright...when?"
You glowed happily and handed him a strip of paper. "This is my address. You can come over at around 3!"
Flashing you another one of his smiles, he nods before leaving with your paper strip in hand...

~Time Skip...because I know you want to get to the good part~
"Hola [Name]!"
"Yeah hello to you too Antonio," you replied letting him in and leading him to your living room.
"Okay," you said, patting the Spanish textbook next to you, "I just need you to help me ace this test mi amigo."
He shifts the book away. "We won't be needing this."
Your eyes widened, your brain not comprehending. "W-Wha? We need the textbook obviously! It has all the terms and-"
"Trust me chica. I'll teach you my own way alright?" he asked.
Frowning slightly, you finally agreed and pouted, "Alright. This better work."
He explained to you what he was going to do. First, he would say a word or a phrase in Spanish while you translated it into English. Then he would say a word or phrase in English that you had to translate.
"Okay. Come at me."
Thinking for a while, he started with "cielo".
"Psh. Easy peasy. It's sky."
You continued the same thing, ranging from thing like "pájaro" to "helado".
"Alright. This time I'll be saying the English okay?" he finally asked.
After being silent for a while, he smiled and said, "I'm doing good."
You looked at him cluelessly.
"You know when someone asks you how are you doing? You have to reply right?"
You nodded hastily. "Y-Yes of course...I-I seem to have forgotten..." you replied embarrassedly.
Maybe it was just your imagination, but Antonio seemed to be getting a little closer.
"It's 'Te Amo Antonio' that means 'I'm doing good Antonio' in Spanish..." he smiled crookedly.
For some reason, you didn't trust him. Maybe it was the way he was looking at you. But he was the native should listen to him right?
"I'm doing good Antonio," he started again, this time more eagerly awaiting your answer. For reasons unknown, you sputtered nervously, "T-Te Amo Antonio..."
You thought you saw him shudder slightly, and his eyes losing their shine and going dark for a moment, but when you looked he was back to normal with that Spaniard smile.
"Alright [Name]~ I think you've gotten the hang of it now!"
Scratching your cheek nervously you replied, "R-Really?"

~Time Skip...the long awaited test results~
"I'm going to be passing out the tests now."
You nervously played with your pencil, rolling in back and forth across the wooden desk. Your palms were sweating and you nervously wiped them against your jeans hoping that it would help. It didn't.
Before you knew it your Spanish teacher had finished passing out the tests. You looked around, everyone had a their test except you. Your desk was empty.
"Miss [LastName], would you please see me after class?" you teacher asked.
For the entire class period while you were working on your Spanish workbook, you wondered what went wrong. Was your grade so horrible that she wanted to talk to you about it? Did she want to kick you out of her class?
As soon as the bell rang to signal the end of class, one of the first people to leave was Antonio. You found that a bit weird, but decided to worry about it later. Right now, all that mattered was your test.
"You wanted to talk to me Ma'am?" you walked up to your teacher's desk nervously.
"Ah yes [Name]. You did very good on this test. You got everything correct..."
You let out a sigh of relief. Yes...!
"...except one. That is what my concern was."
You looked at her with confusion. Was something wrong with your answer...?
"I'm doing good in Spanish is not Te fact, Te Amo actually means...well..." she struggled for the right words.
"...for?" you heard yourself ask.
"Te Amo means I love you in Spanish [Name]..."
Then it hit you.
That idiotic Spaniard.
"I was a bit worried about your answer..." she started.
"It's no problem Ma'am. I'll be sure to fix the problem..." you growled menacingly, dark waves literally surrounding your body.
She gulped noticeably and laughed nervously. "I see...well uh...have a good day!"
Then you headed off to murder a certain Spaniard that had fooled you into confessing to him.
There was going to be some bloodshed.

This is dedicated to :iconhetalia-spain:
Ack. My computer is acting up again so I don't know if I'm posting the right thing or not... :icono-oplz:
Anywho, meh. Not so sure if this one turned out good or not. Leave your thoughts in the comment section below~ :iconhappyskipplz:
Oh Spain you bad bad're about to be murdered by Reader-chan~ I pity you :iconnervouslaughplz:
I'm almost done with my requests... :iconcryforeverplz:

I do not own the picture...even though I wish I did... :iconikissitplz:
Spain belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:
You belong to a certain Spaniard... :iconsexyspain4plz:
And the story and overall plot belongs to this author, only second to Prussia. :iconcross-angel-chan:
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IvyChuChi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*sprints up to Toni and tackles him to the ground*
JessiChan250 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Student Writer
Antonio, mi amor, mi vida, mi tomate, I don't need spanish lessons. It's my first language. Thanks though!
MeridaHofferson Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MargaritaGarcia Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Mmh, Antonio- you'll have a lot of troubles with me ahaha~
Beautiful btw :3
AshleyStarburst1020 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Student General Artist
The moment he flipping tricked reader-chan XD, I was like, "Dis fffff-- DIS FFFF--"... yeah I did censor while saying that little rage. I swear, this was really fun to read though.

(I have read Fanfics with him saying Te amo, and I had to search it up... I found Rihanna's song, and I already knew what it meant...since I'm trying to teach myself simple words in, also because I have some Latin blood; more specifically, Spanish blood in me, so... I felt this strong feeling telling me to learn some of the language -,-)
AshleyStarburst1020 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Student General Artist
I like how I was conveniently listening to a song translated into Spanish X'DJammin' moonflower :bird: :musical: 
UrAverageOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2016  Student Artist
part two is there?
ana-fiolee Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Es hermoso leer estas leseras cuando eres chilena XD Me encanto, sigue así
CheeseyLovelyBuddy Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2015
Toni: "It's 'Te Amo Antonio' that means 'I'm doing good Antonio' in Spanish..."
Story me: "T-Te Amo Antonio..."
Me: Medic's Rage Intensifies (Chat Icon)  "...Te odio tanto ahora, Antonio....Te odio..." 
bree25 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
here's the funny thing im a native Spanish speaker even though  I gowned up in america.....any you spanerd im a going to kill you.
and great story by the way writer-chan
PrincessJo5 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so cute and daaayyymn Antonio, you got her baaaad X
f--ORT--E Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Edited May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me: * Dark Purple Aura *
Toni: HALP!!!
Me: * swears at him in Russian *
Russia: You have become one with mother Russia!
Me: Now lets go kill a certain Spaniard
ToniL * runs to Romano *
animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
The accent fooled me
FireDerpDucky Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015
I love Spanish tutors!
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
When I saw that it had said, Te Amo, I knew that there was going to be death somewhere! ANTONIO! YOU'RE GOING DOWN BASTARD!
Antonio: Oh crap! *Runs away*
Me: But great job writer-chan! :3
JeweledArt Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ese hijo de puta.......
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Student Filmographer
Me: imma go kill someone for a min Kay author-chan!
Spain: I know what's gonna happen *dashes away*
Me: come back!
AquaAKAMultiOmggirl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me: *angrily swears in russian* :iconscaryrussiaplz:
Spain: :iconscaredplz:
animefangirl8 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
Me: I'm going to kill you you bastardo!!

Spain: Adios chica!!
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
tysm for reading and commenting!
N-Cbyrnon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
Because Bloodshed is Little Pixel Heart 
 Your fanfics are awesome Tenshi-san.. I was like 'hah..foolish reader-chan' and then I was kind of thinking why I didn't care about learning Spanish even though my mother side is kind of Spanish
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
ahhh yis <3
aww tysm ;;v;; LOL Spanish is kind of nerve wracking sometimes and I'm taking it rn ;;H;;
KuroLoliDesu Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Aawwww. It would have been so much fun if I didn't knew what 'te amo' means ._. That's all Spanish I know xD Anyways, I loved it~ All-nighter reading all your fanfics <3
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, a lot of people know already so... XD
Thank you~
//paps yo face
my fanfics
I wish
they were worthy lol
sleep tho
health is first
But thank you so much you're so sweet :iconyuihugplz:
KuroLoliDesu Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Sleep is for the weak *_*)
Aww >.< You're welcome :iconglompplz:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
exactly *^*
Hinata-Wolf77 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014   General Artist
Ha ha the end good job.
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sophie-Frost Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Student Writer
Me: ANTONIO CARRIEDO! YOU'RE SO DEAD! >.< *goes look for him*

Lisbon: *pops out of the nowhere* Olá, what are you doing?

Me: n-nothing...

Lisbon: *looks suspiciously at me* are you looking for Toni?

Me: n-no... *thinking: yes!*

Lisbon: *shrugs and walks away* don't let me find you hitting on my baby brother~!

Me: *blushes* WHY WOULD I DO THAT? *mutters* right now i want to kill him more than kiss him! *stalks off to find Antonio*

(Ah, sorry 'bout that! ^^' great story btw :D )
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

Fool Emoji-14 (Pervy Crazy Dance) [V1] 
Thank you for reading and commenting! ;D
ship ship ship ship
Sophie-Frost Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Student Writer
No problem at all, my friend! ^^
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Alternative ending~

me: ANTONIO :iconpewdierageplz:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOL XD Best alternative ending ever :la:
Thank you for reading and commenting! 
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Welcome, friend!
rikona-meganekko Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Writer
I loved this! If that happened to me...let's just say a certain Spaniard would be speaking an octave higher for a while...XD :P 
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear that!
LOL XD Poor Spain~
Thank you for reading and commenting! :heart:
rikona-meganekko Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student Writer
No problem! :)
DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
...That tomato-loving bastard...
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD :iconspainderpplz:
Thank you for reading and commenting!
DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
XD Spain's more terrifying than Russia isn't he?
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes XD
absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Writer
Is there a pt 2?
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Not currently, and I most likely won't be writing a sequel. I'm very sorry ;7;
But thank you for reading and commenting, it makes me very happy to know that you would like to read more c:
absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Writer
It's great, and it's okie. :D
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks c: :hug:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn yo Antonio. Your so dead! Well actually i have other ways a punishing you (mind fills with dirty thoughts)

Love this
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<_<" Whoa there.

Haha, thank you! <3
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