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~Reader's POV~

Needless to say, you were feeling absolutely positively horrible. You had caught a nasty cold that had attacked you from nowhere, and you were currently taking refuge in a mass of blankets.
Worst of all, because your parents were not going to be home for the entire week, you were stuck by yourself. Not only the the feeling of impossible dread fill you up, but also loneliness.
You sighed, deciding to hold a little pity party for yourself when there was a knock at the door.
Who could it be? Probably just some stupid salesmen trying to get you to buy his product...you ignored the knocking and buried into your pillows.
The sound of the lock on your door unlocking and the swing of the door bright you into high alert. Someone had unlocked your door.
Your frail hands tightened around your blankets and you trembled nervously. Just then, a blonde haired male with bright golden eyes stepped into your room.
You blinked. "Ed?"
Indeed it was the Fullmetal Alchemist, in his usual attire, a bag in one hand and a key swinging from his fingers. Your keys to be more exact.
"Hid them better. Some place other than under your doormat," he replied, tossing the keys to you.
"Alright," you managed to say before launching into one of your coughing fits.
He immediately drops his bag onto the ground and hurries toward you. "Are you alright?" he asked, concern leaking into his liquid gold orbs.
"O-Of course! Just a little cold that's all," you joked, after recovering from your coughing.
"It's definitely not just a little cold...I didn't know you were this sick..." he muttered worriedly.
You smiled and have him a weak pat on his hand. "Don't worry. I'll be fine in no time!" you reassured and then added, "So...why'd you come over today?"
"Winry told me to. She made something for you..." he took out a small pot and a bowl and opening it to reveal some chicken soup.
"Tell Winry she's a life-saver! I love chicken soup!"
He merely nodded, and filled up the bowl with the steaming broth. You reached your hands out to receive the bowl, but he wouldn't give it to you.
"What if you have one of those coughing fits again? I-I'll feed you that way it'll be safer," he advised.
You thought about it and agreed. As you sat up, Ed set the bowl down and positioned your pillows so it would be more comfortable for you. He was such a sweetheart.
The first taste of the soup made you realize how hungry you were. Soon, you finished not one bowl but the entire pot of soup!
"Aww...there's no more?"
"Of course there isn't, you ate the whole thing!"
"Oh well..." you pouted sadly.
The next few minutes of awkward silence was disrupted when Edward asked you a question.
"Uh...what do your parents usually do when you're sick?" he asked shyly.
"Well...they tell me stories!" you replied happily.
"Story telling? I don't think I'm good at that..." he mumbled nervously.
"It's alright! It could be anything!" you reassured.
"Okay. But first take your medicine, it'll help you get better faster," he handed you two pills and a glass of water.
Without a second thought, you downed it and waited excitedly for Ed's story time.
"So...Once Upon a Time...in a land far far away, there lived a awesome guy who had an equally awesome nickname. He was known as The Fullmetal Alchemist, and he was extremely popular with the ladies."
You laughed and then nodded to indicate for him to keep going.
"He had many cool adventures with his younger brother and his best friend. His best friend was a girl only a few months younger than him and she was both kind and very pretty."
Unknowingly, you flushed.
"The boy and the girl had a long history together. They've been friends since kindergarten, and they were often teased by other students calling them 'a couple' and 'lovebirds' but they didn't let it ruin their friendship."
"Then one day..." Ed's face turns a bit pink, "T-This strange feeling is born inside the boy. W-Whenever he looked at her it made him feel like nothing else mattered...except her. She was perfect in his eyes, a great personality and a kind heart. But he didn't want to ruin their friendship so he kept it buried under him. Sometimes, it's hard to hide the feelings. He wishes that she would finally see what he feels about her."
You looked up at him confusingly. "Ed?"
Then the drowsiness that the pills inflict took ahold of you. It's invisible arms dragged you down, sagging your body into you warm, warm bed. You fought.
"Wait! E-Ed..." you extended your arms towards him as much as you could.
You felt the familiar feel of his hand grasping yours. "Sleep well [Name]. I love you," and went on to plant a small kiss on your forehead.
I love you too Ed...
And then you succumbed to the sleep and let it envelop you.

~Fin~
Hello~! This is dedicated to :iconcardcaptorhailey:
Sorry it's short...I made it into a drabble ^^;
It's just I am really excited to start this novel thing! :iconyayamericaplz:
Well please to remember to favorite if you like this short piece of work, comment your thoughts (likes and dislikes), and watch me if you want to be updated on more works like these!

I do not own the picture.
I do not own Edward Elric or FMA.
You belong to :iconhappyedwardplz:
Story and overall plot belongs to moi~! :iconcross-angel-chan:
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:iconangllannakurayami:
AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Delilah: Aw, Ed, how come you're never like this when I'm sick?

Ed: You think I'm catching one of your feline diseases?

Delilah: .......*backhand slaps Ed*   JUST BECAUSE I'M A HUMAN PANTHER DOES NOT MEAN I CARRY FELINE DISEASES!! *angrily pounces Ed*
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:iconlittlemissellieelric:
I only JUST saw the America icon in the description
The fuck me XD
I am a major Hetalia obsessive fangirl...
ANYWAY AMAZING STORY!
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Bloodstarthecat34 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
America (The Hero) [V2] 
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:iconlittlemissellieelric:
'Murica! XD
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:iconbellaluna1993:
Bellaluna1993 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015
It was so sweet and cute. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy.
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:iconzombiedswim:
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
Big Hero 6 Baymax (There There) 
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No it's like
Reader-chan/Kun : Aw Ed I love you too!!
Edward-Kun : No I don't love you, I love Winry!
Reader-chan/Kun :
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*Bitch slaps Edward*
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015
XD
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:iconanime-lover229:
anime-lover229 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVED IT
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SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I hate soup!!!!
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  New Deviant  Writer
good for you!Sarcastic laugh- 
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SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
And he hates milk
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ninjamonkey66 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!!!!!!!Benio Nose Bleed Icon   *DIES*
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Student General Artist
CUTE!!!
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:iconvictoriasiren02:
VictoriaSiren02 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015
This story is so cute!
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swiftX123alt1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I love you. This story is awesome. :D
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Kanekiisbae Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Kyaaaaa~ ITS AMAZING nose bleed Benio Nose Bleed IconKomari Kamikita (Very Happy) [V2] 
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DarthChibFangirl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
YAY i wish the next time i am sick elric would do this 0/////////////////////0
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Kyokotoshino Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015
Me to😍
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DarthChibFangirl Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
yeah
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:iconcross-angel-chan:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
ikr ;;v;; <3
Thank you for reading and commenting! ovo
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:icondarthchibfangirl:
DarthChibFangirl Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Well i caught a cold Sick YAYYAY 
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:iconcross-angel-chan:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
it's a sign LOL
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DarthChibFangirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
edward come to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:souleatermoon: Edward: &quot;what the?&quot; ...WTF? Ed Emote 
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DarthChibFangirl Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Keep up the good work:D
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Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
ty <3
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animefangirl8 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
soooooooo cute i'm going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!







x P i is dead
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:iconcross-angel-chan:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
aww no don't LOL
tysm <3

WAIT
NO
BUT
D:
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:iconanimefangirl8:
animefangirl8 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
England brought me back to life with his magic!
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:iconcross-angel-chan:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
aww yay Iggy ;v;
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:iconanimefangirl8:
animefangirl8 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
Iggy!
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  New Deviant  Writer
this is an alternate universe apparently.
IGGY HAS MAGIC SUCCESS!!
iggy:England (Objects) [V2] HEY!!!! I CAN!!
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animefangirl8 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015
What do you mean I guy has always had magic success!

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I love your profile picture and your deviant id!
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  New Deviant  Writer
oh yea sorry I was thinking about his cooking!
I learned the hard way...
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Nikkirubinstein Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Student Writer

Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
aha~ it's okay!
but tbh chain comments don't really curse ppl and idk if you'll get true love but good luck! XDD
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LotsOfCake0310 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
When I first saw the title I was like "murse? As in man purse?" Then I started thinking about Ed carrying around a purse and getting all pissed when someone made fun of it, setting of on a rant about how it is in fact manly and he isn't girly.. Then my brain processed the sick reader part, then I was like "ooooooh! Male nurse! Got it!" Brain what is wrong with you? 0-o
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Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
LOL OMG XD that would be a great fanfic <3
haha no worries
weirdness is good //slapped
tysm for reading and commenting!
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LotsOfCake0310 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
X3 I would've died of laughter if that was what this fanfic was about! I now can't get the image out of my head, so I must make the fanfic happen! Ed needs a man purse NOW! ^•^
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LotsOfCake0310 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Note to self, read the whole title next time 😂
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GreytheGreyt Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG yesss!
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol man I friend you!
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol man I friend you! 
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LotsOfCake0310 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD thank you! It means a lot
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EdwardAlchemist Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*nosebleed*
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:iconcross-angel-chan:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
LOL XD here > :icontissuesplz:
ty for reading and commenting!
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Aizens-girl Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
I love the story, But if this was me In my sick Stupor,
I would probably say.
"Ed.... Is this about you and winry?"
No matter what when I'm sick
I AM CRAZY!!!! Fool Emoji-14 (Pervy Crazy Dance) [V1] wooohoooo!!!!!
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:iconcross-angel-chan:
Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOL XD
OMG THAT ICOn
Thank you for reading and commenting XD
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Aizens-girl Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
No prob! I love the idea of
Ed taking care of me ;)
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