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~Reader's POV~
•••••••••••••••••••••••
Heart beats fast
Colors and promises
How to be brave
How can I love when I'm afraid
To fall
But watching you stand alone
All of my doubt
Suddenly goes away somehow
••••••••••••••••••••••
It's snowing.
You noted the change absentmindedly, staring at the small frozen flakes dropping gently onto the ground around you, nestling in your hair.
He always said you looked beautiful next to the snowy background.
"Miss [Name]...it is cold. We should go in-"
"Stephen. You may enter first with out me."
"Miss-"
"I'll be in soon. I would like to be alone for now."
Sensing that you were in a dark mood, your butler left, with a respectful how at your back. When he left, you sighed heavily and frowned. Your thoughts traveled back to him. That blonde haired boy you had fallen hopelessly for. You laughed, but the sound was cold, frozen. Just like the scene around you.
"You won't ever leave me...right?"
He had asked you that question. That one question that you couldn't answer truthfully. You didn't want him to suffer, after all he's been through. But he found out, eventually with his strong will and gold.
You had to lie. You had to pretend your didn't harbor feelings for the alchemist. If your parents found out, he'd suffer punishment. And you didn't want him to because you, well, loved him.
There you admitted it.
But you were all too late. He was gone. He probably moved on.
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One step closer
•••••••••••••••••••••
You decided to follow after Stephen and enter the household. It didn't help if you stayed outside mourning while catching a cold. You trudged slowly back, your body heavy with sorrow.
•••••••••••••••••••••
I have died everyday
waiting for you
Darlin' don't be afraid
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more
•••••••••••••••••••••
Tonight, it was the masquerade ball that your parents were hosting. You knew that they secretly only wanted you to find a suitable young man and wed him, keeping up the linage of royals. But the only one you could ever love was him. Edward Elric, the Fullmetal Alchemist.
"Miss [Name], it is time for your entrance."
You stood up. "Thank you Margaret. I will head down immediately."
It was time.
Time to say goodbye.
••••••••••••••••••••
Time stands still
beauty in all she is
I will be brave
I will not let anything
Take away
What's standing in front of me
Every breath,
Every hour has come to this
•••••••••••••••••••••••
~Edward Elric's POV~
There she was.
It had been too long, how many years? It felt like a thousand. She was just as beautiful as the night I left, if not more. Her [HairColor] hair flowing down her back in waves, her bright [EyeColor] eyes scanning the crowd effectively missing me, though I couldn't blame her because of the red mask shielding my features from being recognized. The mask she had on was a matching color as the ball gown she had on.
I walked closer to her. I would not let anyone take her away from me. I need to see her...everything...everything has come to this.
••••••••••••••••••
One step closer
I have died everyday
Waiting for you
Darlin' don't be afraid
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more
•••••••••••••••••••
"Hello Miss [LastName]."
I decided in order not to raise suspicion, to just act like any ordinary rich guy would. With formality. Though I secretly despised it...
You turned around to face me with those big [EyeColor] eyes. "Oh! Good evening. You are...?"
"It's a secret," I replied, raising a finger to my lips and giving you a sly wink.
You looked confused, opening your mouth to retort something, when a slow song started and I pulled you into a dance.
You gently rested your hand on my shoulder as we did a small slow dance. I wasn't the best dancer, but you had once admitted that you weren't either.
Then, I felt your cheek press against my shoulder.
••••••••••••••••••••
And all along I believed
I would find you
Time has brought
Your heart to me
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more
•••••••••••••••••••••
~Reader's POV~
He reminded me of Edward...
Those bright golden eyes and that silky blond hair just made me want to run my fingers through it. But I had to restrain myself. Ed would never be here...he's gone now.
I hope he wouldn't mind as I rested my cheek against his shoulder. He even has the same stature Edward would have had...and the same scent...
When the song ended, you broke away, blushing furiously. You mumbled an apology but he just waved it off, smiling a smile that reminded you of your lost love.
"Do you want to know who I am now [Name]?"
You were so curious you almost didn't notice that he had called you by your name. Nodding, you waited for his answer.
•••••••••••••••••
One step closer
One step closer
••••••••••••••••
"I'm none other than Edward Elric, the Fullmetal Alchemist!" he gloated, standing proudly.
You blinked and then laughed. "Ed- I mean, Edward Elric is gone now. You can't be him."
Smiling sadly, he whispered, "Or can I?"
He removes his mask slowly and gingerly.
•••••••••••••••••••
I have died everyday
Waiting for you
Darlin' don't be afraid,
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more
•••••••••••••••••••
It was him. You couldn't believe what you were seeing. It was Edward Elric.
Without wasting a moment, you jumped into his arms, embracing him with tears spilling down your face. You've been holding back so long...so much to say and you didn't have enough time...
He took off your mark to reveal your tear-stained cheeks. He rubbed them off gently with his thumb. "Don't cry [Name]...we're finally together now aren't we?"
You nodded, willing the tears to stop. You had to say something...you had to do something to show you loved him.
"I love you Edward!" you gathered the courage you had and kissed him, hoping that he could feel the love you had for him.
And when he kisses back, the people around you staring...the horrified looks on your parents' faces...the deafening silence...
None of that mattered.
•••••••••••••••••••••
And all along I believed
I would find you
Time has brought
Your heart to me
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more
•••••••••••••••••••

~Fin~
This is the sequel to my Daylight [Edward Elric x Reader]! Click this link to see it... [link]
Hope you like it...sorry for the long wait! I was finishing up my Hetalia x Readers...
I don't have much to say so...
I own the picture! Drew it myself! :iconvictorydanceplz:
I do not own Edward Elric...
You belong to Edward Elric! :iconedyeahplz:
Story and overall plot belongs to moi~ :iconcross-angel-chan:
The lyrics is from "A Thousand Years" by Christina Perri...sorry I'm too lazy to post it...should be on YouTube somewhere...^^;
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animefreak138 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Artist
WONDERFUL! I love this I'm adding it to my favourites now!!!!!
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arialcaramore123 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ai A-chan Fuuyuumi (Tears of Joy) [V1] Tears of Joy Icon base freeThis is so beautiful!!!!
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Student Artist
I. May be rich in this story but the rich cant buy you love and the one i love is Edward elric
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Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
;;7;; so true :heart:
Thank you for reading and commenting! 
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Artist
Welcome
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Edited Sep 23, 2014  New member Student Artist
i saw the ending and it forced me to say awww AND IT DID! so cute. also what does p.o.v. mean?
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Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe~ Glad you liked it! :hug:
POV means Point of View, so like if I say it's in the Reader's POV: It means the story will be written from the reader's perspective c:
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  New member Student Artist
thank you for the answer and your welcome
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Cross-Angel-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! Happy to help ~ 
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  New member Student Artist
:D
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